Maine kaha:
Tumse milne ke baad
Meri rooh key tamaam goshe
Tumhari khamoshiyon se
Bhar jaatey hain
Mai unhe tanhayon ke lamhon mai
Apni palkon se kaat kaat kar
Ek chota sa rumaal bun leta hun
Aur fir apne chehre pe daal deta hun
Ussey tumhare hone ki
Sondi sondi khushboo aati rehti hai
Jaanum
Tumhare paas bhi
Aisa koi rumaal hai kya?
Usne kaha:
Mere paas to
Puri chadar hai pagley!
My comment is going to sound rude but i hope you can take criticisms.. i would say the poem is soo amazing n deep that its eating the title in a way.. so u need to find a more impacting title .. :) god bless
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